My first chapter for my really bad book. (it isn't good)
Chapter 1
"Natalie!" James screeched. I tried to reach down and grab his hand. It was impossible. I stretched my arm so much that it felt like my elbow joint had disappeared. "I will find you! I promise!" I screamed, just as the darkness engulfed James. I stared down for a few seconds more, hoping in vain that he would find a way to climb out.
I knew that he was gone.
He would either die from the fall or die from hunger down there. Slowly it dawned on me that I lost my twin brother. How could I have let this happen.
"Help! Please! Anyone!" I screamed to no end. Nobody came. I was alone now. When I were seven years old, our parents died. They were shot. Nobody knows who by. It happened so quickly. We were a happy family, walking down the road, laughing so hard that we looked crazy! Then the shouting started, people scattered in all directions as gun shots were fired. Lots of bullets hit there targets, our mother and father included. James and I were reluctant to leave our parents sides. But we had to. If we didn't, we would have ended up like them, lying dead on the pavement. We became tramps. Living on the street. Together. Keeping each other safe and happy.
Now I am thirteen years old, and I have lost my beloved brother.
The guns are pretty well balanced but I personally like the XM shotgun and AWP, because they work well with my really laggy internet. Nothing beats a good knife though (;
I understand how you are trying to help me with the friend system thingy. Trust me, I have been in this community for 8 months. If you do PM them, the staff will have this inner-skype conversation. With community pressure, they will accept the suggestion without too much discussion...
Hello Everyone! Today, I have a special announcement! A MINEPLEX BUILD TEAM! The build team is called 'The Ender Collective'! If you are interested in joining, you can go to this link, and try to be accepted into the build team by filling in a form and submitting it!
